|Reviews for Land of the Forgotten|
| bahaghari 8/12/08 . chapter 1
it seemed dark and bloody... emo, but cool.
but i think it best to remove 'of' from the 5th line, and add e to 'haste' in the 11th line. those are just typo though, doesn't affect or ruin the feel of this poem.
| t-t-t-ouch 3/17/08 . chapter 1
I really like it, the rythmn and everything,
I just want to point out that in the second to last line, there may or may not be a spelling error.
'Make hast [haste?] to make your final plea,'
| onyxdragonflyy 3/13/08 . chapter 1
i wonder if anyone could ever guess who wrote what? lol