it seemed dark and bloody... emo, but cool.

but i think it best to remove 'of' from the 5th line, and add e to 'haste' in the 11th line. those are just typo though, doesn't affect or ruin the feel of this poem.

I really like it, the rythmn and everything,

I just want to point out that in the second to last line, there may or may not be a spelling error.

'Make hast [haste?] to make your final plea,'

otherwise, great!

i wonder if anyone could ever guess who wrote what? lol