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| Jesus Loves 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseupdate please |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseinteresting i like it a guy with a smirk and a girl with a name that isn't heard very often and she gets math i definitely like not the math part but the plot line part can't wait for more izzie |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusenice beginning. I think the plot looks nice, but I don't feel the utter 'burn in he-double tooth pick' feeling and some of the bigger words seem forced rather than natural. Ps.- there are spelling/grammar issues scattered about. you might want to edit this chappie. over all, nice work. thanks for posting |
| Sydney-J 14 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusesounds good |