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Jesus Loves
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseupdate please
Oooh.Look.A Cat
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abuseinteresting
i like it
a guy with a smirk
and a girl with a name that isn't heard very often
and she gets math
i definitely like
not the math part
but the plot line part
can't wait for more

izzie
Katherine-the-greate
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abusenice beginning. I think the plot looks nice, but I don't feel the utter 'burn in he-double tooth pick' feeling and some of the bigger words seem forced rather than natural.
Ps.- there are spelling/grammar issues scattered about. you might want to edit this chappie.

over all, nice work. thanks for posting
Sydney-J 14
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abusesounds good
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