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| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-13 ch 1,  | abuseShort, but interesting. I like how you included the little rhyme - it helps with the flow. For the last line, I think you mean 'quit' instead of 'quite', right? =P |
| losing gracie girl 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseso simple...yet painfully powerful. wonderful. yours until the wind changes, Lost |
| just.because.lemonade.stand 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusewow darling i love it =] |