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miss chin
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseAhh I love this one, especially the atmosphere!
Tranquil Thorns
2008-03-13
ch 1,
abusePretty imagery. (:

I like your rhyme scheme, though I think you meant 'sight' instead of 'site' in the first stanza.
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