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WOW.

I love love the imagery of the first line.

short&sweet.
can relate.
keep it up! :)

I wish i could review all of these, but at the moment i dont have the time, but i will go back. These were beautiful and its a shame that your leaving, but i hope you do continue to write, i'll always read your poetry as these are so powerful and passionate, they'll be going under my favourites. I loved these - well done - Rhian.

These are all pretty amazing. I hope you enjoy your break. . . I've just come back. : )
It's a shame that you won't be posting.

These poems are written very well. I love "syllables" especially! (:

the last line of this chapter is one of the most beautiful things I have ever heard.

I love the lines "love and honey,/all names and ribbon-laced promises." Just something about lines like that get to me. Interesting piece. And great title. Keep writing! :)

the transition between the first stanza and the second part of them poem is very creative on your part. (both format-wise and diction-wise) the way you write seems to be of trivial things that have an underlying effect that seems to mean more deep beneath the words. keep at it.

arcane

short, i can't call it terse or really striking either. it isn't exactly the most inspiring piece either, however, you project a great usage of diction and there are subtle traces of affection that can be felt within the first read alone. this is definitely a piece that gets more beautiful after reading it over and over again. cheers.

arcane

my lighter ran out of fluid a few weeks ago
and for some reason
that is what this makes me think of.

absolutely lovely, truly. i love this without a doubt.

Just one of those nice sensual pieces. I don't know that there's a lot of substance here, but it doesn't really matter. Very sexy poem. Keep writing! :)

I love the "skin-tight" bit; the feeling there is very crisp. The third line is just gorgeous. I'm not sure how I feel about the end, though; using "index" makes the poem end kind of awkwardly, IMO. But I do really like the idea of this. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)