 Unrequited Alto 2008-12-12 . chapter 1 This is really sad and true, and it's written very well. |
 Kinsara 2008-11-30 . chapter 1That's so dang sad! It's so very true, though...
I like this poem a lot. It really conveys the regret for mankind's selfishness. Two thumbs up, my friend! |
 An Inside Joke 2008-06-23 . chapter 1You have some nice juxtapositions here, but some border on some cliche ideas -particularly the lines about the child. I like the Mother Nature imagery, though. |
 Rynx-too-genki 2008-04-22 . chapter 1How can you say this isn't polished? Its such a beautiful poem it reminds me of the earth hour message... "I am just one person what can I do?" but with a more in your face attitude! Love this poem! |