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Reviews For: Human Child
Unrequited Alto 2008-12-12 . chapter 1
This is really sad and true, and it's written very well.
Kinsara 2008-11-30 . chapter 1
That's so dang sad! It's so very true, though...
I like this poem a lot. It really conveys the regret for mankind's selfishness. Two thumbs up, my friend!
An Inside Joke 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
You have some nice juxtapositions here, but some border on some cliche ideas -particularly the lines about the child. I like the Mother Nature imagery, though.
Rynx-too-genki 2008-04-22 . chapter 1
How can you say this isn't polished? Its such a beautiful poem it reminds me of the earth hour message... "I am just one person what can I do?" but with a more in your face attitude! Love this poem!
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