"Leo are you alright?" lol

that was great haha "Do i look alright to you?"- inner leo

keep it up lillies

AGHH!
If you don't update this soon I might go crazy!
Honestly I love this!
When I read the beginging I thought it would be stupid, but now I love it!
Very Creative!
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Please dont let it be his ex. Ugh. I dont like the nerve of that girl.

Yale the college?

oh my. I would slap his ex gf. What a loser.

Slight criticism: Sometimes the narrative sounds more like a girl than a boy.

I still love it

Beautiful

keep up the good work XD

uh ... well, i found this chapter a little bit confusing ^^
so, leo is this guy from the prologue, right? is the girl he's talking about in the prologue either kyara or laiya, or someone entirely different? o.0 (i like the names, by the way ^^)

other than that i enjoyed reading this chapter as well. i like leo ^^ he's kind of like the proud and sensitive guy who's been hurt a lot.

i hope the next chapter will be up soon!

wow!
i really liked your beginning, the things you wrote/ he's thinking about life. they were kind of philosophical and i loved it ^^
the story seems to be interesting, too. it's kind of mysterious. i don't know ^^
and you touched my soft side ^^ i love to read stories were the guy is totally in love with the girl and would do anything for her.

keep it up~