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| Hello Hello. 2008-06-06 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. That was amazing. You're brilliant o_o |
| ual 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYou have an amazing voice, I love your diction. Honestly one of the top three poets I have read on fanfiction. Kudos! |
| Sadistikal 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW! I really enjoyed this one! written very well! Thanx for the review! |
| heartbroken922 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abusei loved it. absolutely amazing. it was well said and well written. great job! |
| Lorki 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI love the way the words go together and the words you used all together. good job ^^ |
| Needa S 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat flow. Nicely done. Keep up the great work. |
| Written 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusegood poem! the ellipse at the end I thought made the poem 'fade' away rather than end on a strong, hard, finish, but perhaps that was your own choice. there was some good word play in this and yeah :D this was a great piece from you. I think I've read some of your work before, but this is my favorite! |
| Jesse the Storyteller 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's incredibly interesting. Haha. I have not read something like that on here in a long while. I like how there is hardly any grammar and the thoughts all kind of jumble together. The flow of the poetry was hard to get into at first, but once I figured it out it was good. Wow. I like that. :P -Jesse |
| Melanie Layugan 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseWow! Well written and it flows perfectly! You also made me learn new words! Keep on writing more amazing stuff Anna! Melanie |
| Lurid Black 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseHaha amazing, I really liked this one, it's unique and seems like not a word was out of place =D |
| kloun doll 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseI think there's a lot of confidence in this, I like the flow of the words. |
| Random-Idiocity 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuse'' I've alluded to the fact I am the Last person on earth that would hammer my heart Into their fence for a wage which cannot buy Happiness'' that just blows me away. And I agree with Rafael you really have grown as a writer, (I'm glad you're still around) my friends just gave up on F.P. and you were always one of my favorite authors. Keep it Up! |
| Undrahas 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThis was very good. Please keep up the good work OK? -Undrahas |
| Manuel Fajar 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseIf I listen to your voice often 'nuf Mesmerized I become as if from snake Tumbling, stumbling, fumbling from poisoned heart That fixed balance-point could not then maintain But there's so much joy as your voice exhales Into clear air your scent's perfume as musk That this poor heart cannot but help listen To siren song leading it to crash on rocks |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseI like this... it flows really well and the word choice is magnificent. The only thing I wasnt too sure about was ending in an elipse that jsut seemed odd to me. But still it's a really wonderful piece and very well written |