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Bedlam Chaos 2008-08-21 ch 29,	abuseThis story is good. Really. Well written and, yeah, I was kind of moved by all what happened. It's good and I loved it. And, since I don't think I will say anything more constructive, I'll leave this review here.
EllYouSeeWhy 2008-08-19 ch 1,	abuseAh no sad ending! I hate sad endings! This as really good but please please please do an alternative ending if you havnt already :-[
dr. shrink ika 2008-08-18 ch 30,	abuseI am in absolute love with this story. You, my dear, are an amazing author. This had my heart pounding and I was crying like a kid. I don't really know what else to say other than I wish this were a novel. I'd buy it and read it a bunch.
Cattie 2008-08-14 ch 30, anon.	abuseI couldn't stop crying when I read this! I'm still crying, actually. My sister died driving drunk, leaving a pre-graduation party, so this really hit a chord. You wrote it really well. I did the same thing when I found out she had died. I woke up and thought, "She'll be getting coffee in the student center like she always does" and stuff like that. I'm still crying, ugh. But you really are a great author, even if you make me cry myself to death.
me 2008-08-11 ch 30, anon.	abuseYou know if you ever write a sequel I think that you could use something like someday as inspiration. I was watching it and it really matched up with something that could happen.
Pretzal 2008-08-08 ch 30,	abuseI think this story is good. I would like a happy ending but it was still really good! If you do write an alternate ending, then please tell me!! I would love to read it!!
depthoffury 2008-08-01 ch 30,	abuseVery nice story. I'm amazed. Usually, I hate the kind of endings where they die but it flows well in this story. :-)
VampieSuli 2008-07-31 ch 29,	abuseThis is by far the best story I've ever read. It had me not breathing when they were kissing. It had me screaming when Hogan was being an **. It had me crying at the end. It had me squealing, not breathing, and crying at the Epilogue. Well done is an understatement, my friend.
Jin Tae 2008-07-28 ch 30,	abuseI've been reading this story since the beginning and I think I never reviewed. Sorry I took so long. Thank you for finishing this story. Most would have scrapped it if they lost the energy/interest and yet you ploughed on. Most would have abandoned the writing if they had "bad experiences with this story", choosing to put aside for something fresh. I really respect you, not only for finishing "**" but for NOT changing the plot and tone to suit some of your reviewers. I wish you good luck and happier experiences with your future writing.
Angelhacker 2008-07-28 ch 30,	abuseWe all love you. And I love this story. Do what you want with it, but I think it's fine the way it is. Hope to see you around sometime soon. ^_^ Good-bye for now!
Shades Of Autumn 2008-07-28 ch 3,	abuseThis looks really good so far! I'm intreagued by the curious habits of this school. There are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes - and you seem to be a little trigger-happy when it comes to the Italic button - but those are only little things. Go easy on the parenthesis, too - there's no need for your hero to justify his every action. Let the reader draw they own conclusions as to what he's doing and why, instead of force-feeding them explanations. Eg: "I made a mad dash to it and locked myself inside as if I were being chased by a murderer. (I’m known to overreact about everything nowadays.)" The fact that he's overreacting should be apparent to us as readers. If you want to build up a guy's character try and do it with examples, not statements. The word here is subtlety - that's what makes a good writer. That's all I can offer so far in terms of constructive critism. Just go easy on the parenthesis, change the sentances in italics back to regular script (if you're doing your job right there should be enough emphasis in the words themselves to make an impact) and correct a few minor grammar/punctuation mistakes and you should be fine. :)
KumKum 2008-07-28 ch 30,	abuseI think you did a good job with this story. I was ** when you killed Hogan, but I read the last 3 chapters today, and they're very beffitting of my mood. I hate tragedy, but you did a good job.
Twin Eclipse 2008-07-27 ch 29,	abusei'm sorry to say, that after you killed him off, i only skimmed chapters... you disappoint me with this ending, and i would 100% appreciate an alternative ending... might even go through drastic measures to beg for one, including harassing all of your reviewers into harassing you, plus me also harassing you... annoying and unpleasant...
Angelhacker 2008-07-25 ch 29,	abuseI love it. I'll always remember this story. Hope to see else as amazing as this! ^_^
MlleKathy 2008-07-25 ch 29,	abuseD: GAH so mushy, so... sad! In a positive way. Bravo bravo. Brought tears to my eyes again. ; D You betch lol

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