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Reviews For: Finding Evan

Faith Adeline 2008-07-04 ch 3,	abusethe updates are good. I like em. One thing, thoughts are just in italics, no ''. Those are really only used for quoting in diologue. Keep it up :) Faith
cheergurl12 2008-06-20 ch 2,	abusewhy dnt u just post like chapters up one at a time? cause i rly like this story and its only been one chapter :(
Faith Adeline 2008-06-03 ch 2,	abuseMmk, for some reason, when I read this, I didn't review. SO, I like it, it has potential. Only, be careful about rushing things, not doing a little sign to specify there's been a time gap, and changing povs. You went from first person to third, which was odd lol. I think those three things are your main concerns right now. Because the first chapter could be broken into like. . .five. It just all seems rushed. Anyways, keep it up and update soon! Faith
cheergurl12 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusewen are u going to update finding evan cause thts a rlly good story so far
found.eventually 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abuseHoly cow. OKAY. WHOA. Hahaha. I need to breath. I think I read the older version of Finding Evan (I THINK. I mean, the name sounds familiar), but uhm, i'm quite sure this is a lot, A LOT better. I still don't know where this is going, but that's a good thing. It's unpredictable! :) There's just a slight confusion between uhm, I think you changed POVS from Jonah to the third person, but you didn't state or mark it, so it got a little confusing. But it's still good.
Unique Child 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOh my god! I love it. I can't wait to read more of it. Totally new and completly awesome. I love how you changed it all around, and I'm so proud of you that you finally got it back up. I have faith in you!
ArghImaPirate 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abuseThe characters have...well character. they are a riot and I did not read teh original so I can't compare but it's off to a good start!

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