*sighs*
you never use my ideas...fine then I won't give you any more ideas!

I have another idea:
Sam should get seperated fromn the other two when they enter the portal.

Sweet chapter! I can't wait to see when they go to Tanaril! Update as soon as you can!

MORE! I NEED MORE!
I have an idea.

you should have Katie and Mark go through but leave Sam then Sam should comtemplate wheather or not to ignore her friend's request of staying in the world she is in.
then Sam decides to follow after them but her memory is lost when she runs into something on the other side of the portal.

and that is my simplifiyed version of what I think the next chapter should be like.

it was ok, it could use some more detail...

Loved the chapter ^^ Jee, I wish I had a necklace like that :)

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Good chapter. Mark sounds cute! I think your chapters could do with being much longer. Try adding more details and maybe more of Katie's inner thoughts and feelings. I think you should have her freak out much more when Mark appears from the tree. Where exactly were the four parallel scars? That wasn't really clear.
The plot is coming along nicely. You have very creative ideas!

Interesting start! I liked the fast pace in this chapter. In future chapters, I think you should spend more time on sensory details, but for this chapter the small details kept the story moving forward.
I noticed one grammar mistake. When a person is speaking, and you follow it with "said so-and-so," you use a comma instead of a period.
For example:
"Same to you, Thomas." Katie teased becomes
"Same to you, Thomas," Katie teased.
Also, any time you use quotes, the word right after the quote, unless it is a proper noun, is lower-case.
"Well, that's a shame." The voice replied becomes
Well, that's a shame," the voice replied.
I hope that helps. Sorry for the lengthy review. I'll be sure to read more!

Yes, that describes my mother as well; overprotective, and my dad as well lol. Nice chapter, but I can't imagine myself sleeping in a tree! I can't believe that guy is that crazy -.-`

Update Soon, and I can't WAIT for more! *Is excited*

There are some rather clever lines in this. I especially like the exchange between the mother and daughter in the third chapter. It showed their relationship well. I see that Katie intends to ask her mother about her past and may I suggest that such a scene would be perfect for revealing the motives for her mother's overprotectiveness.

another thing... the title caught my attention! nice!

i love the start! may i suggest a bit of description of the characters with the narrative... overall it's worth the time! muah!

Hey, hey, hey, she's got Amnesia!

Either that she's just forgotten about it and getting used to her normal life! Hehe, can't wait for more!

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I have two words to describe this...

AWESOMELY COOL!

That's all I have to say. Creepy dream thingies! O.O I can't wait to see if there's horror in it!

I think you'd do a good job in writing Angsty fics because you're a good writer with good ideas lol ^^ Don't worry, I'm not forcing you. Just on of my weird comments -.-`

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