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| angel953 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abusei like this. i can almost hear you saying it. i can relate well to this one too. nice work here. you have a typo btw..you said "noone" it should be "no one" (2 words not 1) byez |
| Frogalog 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if you intentionally or unintentionally let the poem progress the way it did, but either way I felt the immense pain and frustration seeping from the it's words. excellent job. |