I love this one. The summary of it is rather adorable, and the whole setting here is so 'dreamy'. Well that's how I see it. This is really a delightful read.

I like how flirty this is! Very different style from your normal works, but I like it.

This is really...I don't know I can't really find just a single word to describe this.

I kind of reminds me of hot sultry nights, drums beating low in the distance, bonfires at night on the beach, bodies packed closes dancing...

Very mysterious and good; your haiku evokes strong images I can see clearly with such few words. Good job, and I can't wait to read more of your work.

-PunK.cHEw.AsIAn

I think I agree about the last line, unless you didn't want the rhyme present. Or maybe it just sounds more idiomatically "right" to me. It also seems like this has little to do with actual dancing. *grin* Well done as usual.

Peace, Doc

for some reason the last line I wanted it to be come on, babe, let's play... I dunno why

Anyhow I like it... I really love the title it's beautiful adn the piece is great as well. nicely done

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I like this, especially the first line, and the word choice is very good -- I like "sleepy beats" which doesn't really make much logical sense but I completely get what you mean. However, the "babe" on the last line only seems like it's there just to make the syllables right.

nice wording, evokative of a the scene. good haiku.