Reviews for Black and white - FictionPress.com

Perfidious 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseArticulate, yet faintly annoying what with all the "she was...while he was.." Better than the others though.
emerald 2008-03-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat...was good! You played with the weather/nature and opposite metaphors really well. I loved the stars shining over the snow. Then, the Sistine and the Milky way, great writing! You got your point across and kept me reading and intrigued till the very end. And shortness just adds to the charm. Adore it!
xx_____xx 2008-03-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseOH WOW! I am speechless..
found.eventually 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseHAHA. Oh my goodness, you know, i actually had an idea for a story that has the same storyline as this one! Thank goodness I never managed to write it down. It would've been awful if our stories clashed, wouldn't it? I like the contrast between them, and how they can still fit each other so perfectly well. It's really different from your other works, but I still like it. :)
Vijayta and Krishna 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseby the way...love the language...suBtle knife...and the complicated words
washedmemories 2008-03-14 ch 1,	abuseThis is the first one-shot I've read of yours, and I'm just simply amazed. There was only one or two of the descriptions I didn't like as much as the others, but it didn't throw it off at all. Great job! xEsaul
Vijayta 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! intense...I must say...SO different from your other stories! LOVE the language used!