Well, I know the intent behind this poem *wicked grin* but I'll just take it from a feminist interpretation, since I prefer it that way.

Interesting take on a boring-old nursery rhyme...it could possibly be improved (although you might need to experiment, or it could sound sing-songy), if the lines you wrote rhymed. Overall, nice satire and a wonderful way to stick it to the patriarchy and its mindless supporters.

"maids for men and nothing else." = favorite line

Ha! How about a maid living for herself alone?

love it. the way you change the tune of the rhyme into something heavier and darker and very opposite to what it's known as is awesome. keep up the good work!

Very interesting. I think a lot of people might not understand this though, but i liked it. Very creative use of a ordinary nursery ryhm.