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righthere431
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abusei knew it was jonathan all along =/ it just sucks that emma is so dense
CrossMyHeart
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abusebut...but...but thats so SAD!
you made me wanna cry now.
it was good though... up until the living vegetable part came along. WAHH!
XxCrossMyHeartxX
alittlebitconfused
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseAww... So sad, but sweet.

One thing I liked was that the first line caught my attention, which was good.
How Emma's name was introduced was a bit awkward- in the first sentence, she's only 'she', and then all of a sudden, BAM! There's her name.
Another odd thing... School on the 21st of July? (I'm writing this review as I read...)
I really like your writing style, it flows well, and keeps me interested :)
And oh! Tyler's so mean! (...at least... right now.)
And oh dear, the dreaded mirror scene - one of my pet peeves, I think - I've seen the mirror thing SO many times. There HAS to be some other way to introduce the character's appearance!
Oh, the phone message is so sweet! I should stop writing this review and just read the story already, shouldn't I?

Oh... You make me sad. :( It was really sad, but so sweet... Amazing, but sad. It really moved me, it's powerful.
The Silverdark Knight
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseWow, poor guy. This is really depressing. Yeah, just a little cliched, but yeah. Anyway, it's got that hell of a twist at the end. Works out well.
Sydney-J 14
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseim so sad
i cant believe he's in a coma
i dont know whats worse - a cma or dying
plus emma is like obssesed with tyler - wouldnt she atleast get over it after like 9 years
anyway what happens to her after she finds about his coma
gulistanlik
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseWell fancy that, my last one-shot to read is actually quite sad. :(

But I really do love this, it may be my favourite out of all your one-shots because though it may be cliched, it is possible, including the ending. What sucks is that Emma won't be getting a second chance, or may be she will. And that's realistic, too, because there aren't always second chances in life, which sucks eh? Then again, some get there second chances but they screw that up too.

Anywho, I'm getting way too philosophical, hehe.

Keep up the good work!

gulistanlik
Hammy Paradise
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuse*sniff* I love tragic endings.

No, really, I do.

I love you now.

The thing about gaurdian angels, is that they're dead people, yo.
poop.eyes
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseOMG, DUDE! WHAT THE HELL?! MAKE IT LONGER AND MAKE HER WAKE HIM UP! DAMMIT! THIS HAS TO BE LIGHTHEARTED! WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO EMMA?! DAMMIIT! :'O

So many dammits.

... It's so sad...

GAH!!

I NEED A LIGHTHEARTED ONE-SHOT!!
Cashaholic
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusewow, this is soo sad. I feel like sobbing now. A heartbreakingly beautiful one-shot indeed, well done! =')

x. Cashaholic
atreyu love
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abusethat.. was soo sad.
not even kidding.
it almost made me start crying.
but i wonder, does Tyler like her too?
Lily Llynn
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseAw... depressing, but very realistic in that way. Love isn't always requited, and there's multiple cases of unrequited love here. I like the characters, but I feel sorry for Jonathan. He doesn't deserve to be in the hospital. ):
But again, excellently written, and therefore an excellent oneshot and an excellent addition to our c2 from woodstock1969. (:
nikita
2008-04-05
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was sad. and not a bad sad (rhymes!ok wrong mo' to bring that up but...) but like tear-jerking sad. but i didn't cry because i like to lead myself to believe i am a strong person.

*reaches for the tissues*

i knew it was Jonathan as did countless other readers but as always the main character is oblivious to all thats happening around her. i can't begin to tell you how FRUSTRATED i got when she thought it was whathisname and not Jonathan.

Argh.

i liked this story because i felt i could relate to it. because right now i am also head over heels in love with this guy and obviously he doesnt know that. minus the guardian angel bit.

so yeah. good story. =]]
someonehere
2008-04-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseoh my god, this story is so sad... i can't believe she didn't know! i love jonnie! and now, he's like a vegetable...:( btw, sorry, my caps doesn't work.
Blue Bird Cry
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseI feel like crying.
silvershadow23
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abuse:(
sadness.
really.
i had to reread.
i didn't think you would kill Jonnie :(
but i was glad to see a knights tale mentioned. :)
i warped you, didn't i? hehe
loves!
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