|Reviews for Rose vision|
| May Elizabeth 9/26/08 . chapter 1
I love this. I just simply love this.
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 3/16/08 . chapter 1
Sweet poem. Nice job!
| mockerytheif 3/14/08 . chapter 1
This is good, i like the ending, very cool, keep it up
| simpleplan13 3/14/08 . chapter 1
I pretend to be a boy today/I pretend to be a boy tomorrow... I'll pretend tomorrow, though I didn't really like the repetition here
I like the part about needing a prince and the part about being in a dream bubble.. that was really great
I waited you.. waited for
I love the ending... being a revolution that was really awesome... the only thing I might say is you have some punctuation in there, but you're also missing a lot.. I would either get rid of all of it or add the rest in... just a thought
Anyhow it's a really pwoerful and well done