I love this. I just simply love this.

Sweet poem. Nice job!

XKristie MarieX

This is good, i like the ending, very cool, keep it up

I pretend to be a boy today/I pretend to be a boy tomorrow... I'll pretend tomorrow, though I didn't really like the repetition here

I like the part about needing a prince and the part about being in a dream bubble.. that was really great

I waited you.. waited for

I love the ending... being a revolution that was really awesome... the only thing I might say is you have some punctuation in there, but you're also missing a lot.. I would either get rid of all of it or add the rest in... just a thought

Anyhow it's a really pwoerful and well done