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| Arn 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abusehey pretty good. I like the descriptions and the clone idea. |
| Kaiyako Kagami 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseHey! This is a good opening chapter, it makes me wonder what will happen in the next. I like the idea of this story, what if you saw someone that looked exactly like you...well me, I would totally freak out. You might want to include some more details about Terry as a person. I'm not saying like a physical description, but maybe his age. Keep Up The Good Work! Kaiyako K. |