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| forgotten-magick 2008-08-24 ch 8,  | abusenice chapter. update soon |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-08-22 ch 8, | abusedod, why would you have to apologize for making an extra long chapter? its cool, dont worry about it. ** awesome, btw XD more soon, yeah? |
| Chuck 2008-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseyo, this is good stuff...!(: |
| U no who I am 2008-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseI liked it, it was good; keep going. More chapters now. Work! |
| i have no name, im a ghost 2008-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abusebest ever! tris is such a great writer, i am adicted to kyle and kaelan now. i wana make out with one... or both... of them lol. i no there fake but hey! i dont like brian. |
| your mum 2008-08-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseWANT MORE!1 |
| ashlee hewitt 2008-08-20 ch 6, anon. | abusetris is a great writer hu i love cause shes ma daughter... kinda anyway, i love u tris. ps. all chapters great so far. |
| Arastel 2008-08-20 ch 8, | abuseinteresting, dark and kinda depressing but still intertaining. |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 7, | abuseaw! *dies from cuteness* hehe, then it turned kinda hott at the end XD i say a) because im just a horny teenager like that XD |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 6, | abuseaw, the ending was cute! Kaelan does like him! hehe |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 5, | abuseoh, damn cliffhangers XD Kaelan should take care of him while he's all injured hehe |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abuseaw, the ending was so sad. I hope Kyle's okie. |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 3, | abuseoh, Kaelan likes him. ^^ cute chapter XDD its sorta like insta-romance, though. XP no offense or anything of course |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseoh, I love the name Kaelan! awesome choice. and Kyle's really cute XDD |
| xdinoxcorex 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abusewow, that was graphic, but really good. ^^ |