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| Tytherpol 2008-03-16 ch 1,  | abuse:o = -my face- this is pretty amazing. "sometimes me," is definitely my favorite line. the structure of this is so different and effective. just awesome, really. |
| hey maria 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like the structure of this poem, and the lines "My mother, she/is cursed/with eagle eyes/and a dreamer's mind." I also like this because it reminds me a lot of my mother. |