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Tytherpol
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuse:o = -my face-
this is pretty amazing.
"sometimes me," is definitely my favorite line.
the structure of this is so different
and effective.
just awesome, really.
hey maria
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI really like the structure of this poem, and the lines "My mother, she/is cursed/with eagle eyes/and a dreamer's mind." I also like this because it reminds me a lot of my mother.
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