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simpleplan13
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseI like the rhyming it flows well and I also like the repetition... nice job
Manuel Fajar
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abusewe want not heart to be a throw-away
piled high in trash bins or far-off landfills
where toxic waste and disposables rest
in desolate abandonment's dire fate

but rather wish we for an Eden here
where tender cares our deepest love fulfills
with nurturing and sympathy of soul
a dream we'll seldom find in life fulfilled
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