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| simpleplan13 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhyming it flows well and I also like the repetition... nice job |
| Manuel Fajar 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusewe want not heart to be a throw-away piled high in trash bins or far-off landfills where toxic waste and disposables rest in desolate abandonment's dire fate but rather wish we for an Eden here where tender cares our deepest love fulfills with nurturing and sympathy of soul a dream we'll seldom find in life fulfilled |