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| Natasha5 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis was truly lovely. The tense was all over the place, but for some reason, I found this one of the things that made it so lovely. It's like it was happening and looked back on at the same time. Your characterisation was so crisp and beautiful, and the story itself was well thought-out. It really felt like America during the Great Depression. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for writing it. |
| Qryous 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseYour stories are so sweet. I love it. The ending made it sweeter |
| nonaccount 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. That's exactly what I said when I finished reading this oneshot. Great use of language and imagery, "Their lips rolled together and fingers shredded the lines between them." Just wow. |
| elianah 2008-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThanks for writing such a great story! |
| Daydream Nation 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty...sophisticated. ;P And sweet. And cute. I loved it. |
| magalina 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseDammit, your stories are perfect. :) :) |
| MUMSI 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI love you. You write like a pimp. Seriously. You are the writing pimp and I will gladly strut at street corners for your pimped out words. I read the last lines over and over until they became a nonsense loop in my head-and it's still the **-with-a-z. |
| Vintor 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was **' awesome! I loved it, so cute and oh i was not expecting Bobby to be rich :D love love love! |
| Rubedo Jr. 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI really like the concept of this, back in the Great Depression, amidst all of the Hoovervilles and Jungles and Okies...really had that atmosphere, you know? And it carried itself so well that it didn't need to be explicit. You just ride along until its conclusion and simply feel better for it. I can't wait to see what else you can cook up. |
| Secret Panda 2008-03-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. You've got a helluva lot of talent and your style is simply breathtaking. I couldn't stop smiling at the end and it put me in such a good mood. The relationship between Walter and Bobby gave me the fuzzies and I still can't stop smiling. |
| i-see-faeries 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was cute. Very historical, and I like it. It's nice to see something new from you. And this is just aweosme. Good job. |
| Shadow 3013 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat job, darlin'. This story was subdued in a good, classy way, and I really liked it. It almost makes me wish I'd paid more attention in history class--and believe you me, it takes a lot to do that. Keep up the good work, and keep writing! |
| Amindaya 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI love the setting. I love how you included all the little details, like the Hoovervilles, to bring the time period alive so vividly. I really like the characters; they have such an easy naturalness, especially when Bobby was joking with Madeleine. |
| stardance 2008-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this |
| Back of Beyond 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat one-shot, especially because of it's original setting. :] I'm just sad there's no more to read! xD |