This is so, so sweet! Anything about the Prohibition era and I'm, like, totally hooked. I loved it.

Wow! Who would have thought that Depression Era romance is the best? I really loved this story, and the ending line was great.
Whew, this was good.

this was absolutely beautiful. your writing was flawless with no glaring typos and the flow of EVERYTHING was perfect. this was probably a one-shot at it's greatest. I've been judging for SRA (sorry not your judge) and this has really lifted my mood. Wonderful job!

This is, I think, my favorite one-shot on this entire website. Definately one of my favorite stories, it's just amazing. I'm a sucker for Depression-era type stuff, though, so I guess I'm being a little biased but really, who cares? :P

I've definately got much love for Bobby and Walter's characters, and the sweetness of them both when they're together.

I could read this a bajillion times.

That was incredibly beautiful. You really know your stuff and your writing? I have no words for how amazing it was.

Wow.

I don't really know how to say (would even had trouble in French, so in English... v.v), there's a strange rythm in your words, yours sentenses, something that made me ill at ease at first and before I knew it, I was kind of enthralled. Strange. I'm not sure if it's this story or your way of writing... I like it, I guess, "like" just doesn't seem to be the right word to describe it. But there's something in it and I felt it.

I adore period pieces, so I'm definitely glad I found this! The description of the 30s is wonderful; I was pulled into the era right off the bat!

aw, you wrote such a cute little story. Good job!

that was totally ** great. just gone finished studying the depression in history, too.

Wow. Powerful. Really enjoyed that. Wish this wasn't a oneshot, b/c these characters are wonderful!!

So sweet. It felt like a small part of something bigger. And I don't really know what I mean by that because it's perfect as a oneshot...

Favourite lines: "Because no, he didn’t know he could have this. He didn’t know the world would let him have this, and God, he didn’t care how cruel life could be, this makes up for everything."

This was truly lovely. The tense was all over the place, but for some reason, I found this one of the things that made it so lovely. It's like it was happening and looked back on at the same time. Your characterisation was so crisp and beautiful, and the story itself was well thought-out.

It really felt like America during the Great Depression.

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for writing it.

Your stories are so sweet. I love it. The ending made it sweeter

Wow. That's exactly what I said when I finished reading this oneshot. Great use of language and imagery, "Their lips rolled together and fingers shredded the lines between them." Just wow.

Thanks for writing such a great story!