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webofdreams89
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abusewow, this was really amazing. i loved the way you used the idea of ice to describe him, it was perfect.
Moondog Dozier
2008-03-23
ch 1,
abuseThe tone in this is marvelous, as well as the progression of thought. It seems that you given just enough specific detail to get the reader involved without completely personalizing it which would have it lose the universal feel. Excellent comparison and continuation of the symbolic elements. Great write.
Disasters Disappointment
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseagain with the loving it :) its amazing, but i think you meant irish leather, not heather. its so pretty and great and you-like
Hearts Stars and Broken Bon...
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseWow.

Just... wow.

This has the most incredible imagery that i've seen in a long time. I love the way you've written this. The speaker seems to be strong, but almost like it's too much for her to handle, and it's driving her insane. Then the last lines (and you might as well have been the sun,/the way i revolved around you.) show the part of her that can't be strong.

This was amazing =]

k.X
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