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| Oracle of Destiny 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis is quite an interesting one. It's like it's saying that only the loved one (the woman) could read him like an open book while others can't. |
| Kumquat21 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseHmm, I don't know how to review haikus . . . other than to say it's lovely. It tells everything all at once. Would you think of doing a collection of these? |
| Artemis Anderson 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful |
| W. Griffin 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusethis poem is great! the last line reminds me of the poem that i wrote titled "unnamed"... ! check it out! -w. griffin |
| Jesusfreak43091 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusewow! that's awesome!! wonderfully written, i really like it |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseAww. I thought this was sweet. It speaks of a special bond. A successful haiku. |