 Oracle of Destiny 2008-03-28 . chapter 1This is quite an interesting one. It's like it's saying that only the loved one (the woman) could read him like an open book while others can't. |
 Kumquat21 2008-03-16 . chapter 1Hmm, I don't know how to review haikus . . . other than to say it's lovely. It tells everything all at once. Would you think of doing a collection of these? |
 Artemis Anderson 2008-03-15 . chapter 1Beautiful |
 W. Griffin 2008-03-15 . chapter 1this poem is great! the last line reminds me of the poem that i wrote titled "unnamed"... ! check it out!
-w. griffin |
 Jesusfreak43091 2008-03-15 . chapter 1wow! that's awesome!! wonderfully written, i really like it |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-15 . chapter 1Aww. I thought this was sweet.
It speaks of a special bond. A successful haiku. |