i likedd it. the first line was xreative. i would have just said "breath" or the likes instead of gills. i actually counted out the syllubulls for this. and it worked! haha. good job. soorry if my spelling sucks right now. I'm holding a baby and typing with one hand. :)

You're telling me (x . x)

Yep, that's all true - I agree with you. When you reach adulthood then things get slightly complicated and then you're starting to be more pressured in life for whatever reason.

Ain't it the truth!

Very interesting. I like how you compare us to humans as they dive into water, they start losing breath or something like that. The more deeper you swim, the more your lungs call for air. I like.

Good haiku. :) Write on!

Anna _