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Reviews For: Pressure of Adulthood
Oracle of Destiny 2008-03-28 . chapter 1
Yep, that's all true - I agree with you. When you reach adulthood then things get slightly complicated and then you're starting to be more pressured in life for whatever reason.
Spirit Tigress 2008-03-26 . chapter 1
Ain't it the truth!
Arn 2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I like how you compare us to humans as they dive into water, they start losing breath or something like that. The more deeper you swim, the more your lungs call for air. I like.
Princess-anna57 2008-03-15 . chapter 1
Good haiku. :) Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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