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| The Dumbing Down Of Love 2008-10-07 ch 24,  | abuseThere are a bunch of random line breaks in the later chapters...you might want to fix them... I'd change the end. It didn't really seem like an end. When I read the "THE END" I actually just blinked a coupla times and went "huh? wha??" Good story though. There are way too many "brother's best friend" stories on FP =P |
| sammygurl262316 2008-10-05 ch 24, | abuseLOVE LOVE LOVE IT. :) |
| centenarian 2008-10-04 ch 24, | abuseI love your story. I love Thrasher. It was a simple story but I loved it, really. I'm sorry to hear your last author's note. I think you should get in touch with your writing roots again. Its not about the reviews and the popularity. Its about you and your passion for writing. I hope you find what you're looking for. |
| Megannnnx3ily 2008-10-04 ch 24, | abuseAmazing! Hmm, this is completely like awesome. I loved the story. Cliches just kind of get to me. So i guess im kind of biased. But it was really great no matter waht. :) I should probably go to bed now... |
| cherrypiesizzle 2008-10-01 ch 20, | abuseThis story is unlike your others because it just has such a clarity to it; it's amazing. It has so much truth to it. I feel like it's speaking to me; and that it's stuff I go through myself. My fav story of yours, by far. |
| IHateMyLoveLife 2008-09-30 ch 24, | abuseThat was awesome! It took me a while to read it because 1. It was so long. 2. I was doing science. The beauty of homeschooling. I really liked how it was more about getting Lindsay to become friends with Thrasher than the girlfriend/boyfriend thing. I just loved this. My friend is actually named Lindsay Marie. I just thought that was so funny. She has a different last name though. We figure out Thrasher's real eye color, but what about his hair? I was really impressed with the fact that there was any real typos and for being so long it still kept my attention. Sometimes long stories just bore me, but I just kept wanting to figure out what was going to happen next. I'm going to see what else you have to offer. |
| pretitiful 2008-09-29 ch 24, | abusenice ending :) loved the story. |
| pretitiful 2008-09-29 ch 20, | abuseaww. they kissed. that was sweet. :) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-28 ch 14, | abusehaha. its so funny when lorraine and thrasher aruge. they're like 5 year old. but its amusing and entertaing. lol. :) |
| Angel-Leigh Jones 2008-09-28 ch 24, | abusehiya I really liked this story. I found it a bit short but in saying that it still fitted really well. Love the ending angel |
| pretitiful 2008-09-27 ch 12, | abuseWES AND RAE WAS IN THE CHAPTER! HAHA. i was like. 'hey. that name sounds so familiar!" :)) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-27 ch 10, | abusehe just dumped her on the porch?? lol. okay. well that's totally friendly. but anyway. linsday really funny when she's drunk. haha |
| pretitiful 2008-09-27 ch 9, | abusethis story is really good. thrasher is different but he's sarcastic and funny at the same time. :) the car ride with lorraine and thrasher was amusing. im glad that things between thrasher and linsday are starting to get better. its not perfect but its better than the time they first met. :) |
| pretitiful 2008-09-26 ch 1, | abuseooh. who is this thrasher dude?? sounds very mysterious... :) off to read the next chapter. i liked it btw. and very intersting. |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-09-25 ch 24, | abuseThis was such a sweet story. I was really able to get into it especially when it came to them dealing with their issues and stuff. I really like it :) |