Excellent chapter once again!

I especially loved the conversation between Thrasher and Lindsay in the beginning of the chapter. It showed a lot more of their personalities, and the beginning ("I'm naturally blonde, you know") was funny- I could totally connect to that.

Yay, she will become friends with the one asian girl! _

Oh, and the poem was funny as well.

ooh a vunerable side to thrasher, i didn't expect that but it does make the story more intrestin, so keep updating!

Loved it! And it's so interesting how Thrasher seems vulnerable and at the same time aggressive. Defensive mood I guess, but I really like the way you write his character )

Update soon!

Mia

Yes! I am back in the reviewing pit! (Sorry, I'm watching CSI Miami now and the ep's about Grand Prix Miami... race car drivers can be so hot. Oh gosh. Shutting up now.)

Okay, so honestly, I am extremely intrigued by Thrasher. I'll just call him that unless something happens, which I'm pretty sure will. Whoo! I was always put off by the description of purple eyes, because it's just... who has naturally purple eyes? So the thought of someone deliberately wearing purple contact lenses (I think) fascinates me. The colour he chose to dye his hair too. If he wants people to leave him alone, all the less reason he'd chose to change his appearance like that. Ooh er, you have made a very good mystery here, Sarah. ;)

The poem was very out of the ordinary too. Most warnings go 'get out of my friend's face, insert deragatory word here, or you'll pay', but A Helping Soul goes the nice route. I'm thinking he/she kind of likes Lindsay and doesn't want her to be hurt. Hm... All this contemplation is making my head spin! :D

Speaking of Eragon! I wanted to watch the movie but I don't know why I didn't. My friend loves it to an extreme. And boys who actually read are totally sexy. Thrasher has something going on there, hehe.

Toni's and Lindsay's conversation about psychological disorders made me laugh too. I'm really interested in that (after the Supernatural episode about Roosevelt Asylum, which creeped me out half to death) and the 'do you realize you just diagnosed him with three different psychological disorders?' made me feel like laughing, somehow. Actually, schizoprenia goes extremely well with multiple personalities. My sister has mild schizo and she used to swing to and fro these very extreme moods. I guess it depends on the intensity of the case :/

So... and the leprosy thing reminded me of the Bible, when Jesus healed the lepers. LOL, I was like 'Louisa, stop being random right now!' Neh, ignore me :D

Alrighty, update soon! Dying of suspense here!

Great chapter! Best one yet, I'd say. This was a great chapter, the characters are starting to get personalities of their own and a bit more dimension. I can't believe Ketchup Boy was reading Eragon. That book sucks! But at the same time it's kinda cute and cheesy. I could totally see him reading that pile of crap. Heh heh. Please update soon! I really want them to get all close and make out. :D

Good job so far. I'm really enjoying the characters in this piece.

However, a few things I'd like to point out- you're missing question marks frequently, mostly when Thrasher talks. Just heads up.

And the end of "Curiosity killed the cat" is "but the satisfaction brought it back." Everybody always forgets the end of it, and I though that the end would have made a better retort than "Good thing I'm not a cat, then." Because despite saying that, Lindsey seems like a cat to me. Here's why: Cats always seem to be able to detect somebody who's allergic to them, and then, they hang around that person more than anybody else (I'd know; I am allergic to cats, and they love me). That seems like Lindsey to Thrasher.

Anyhow, love your work, keep it up, and dying for a new chapter already:

SK Magicker

Hello there again,

I'm glad you updated. This gets better with each chapter, and I love the dynamic you've got going between the characters. It's part of what makes this story really interesting. Thrasher seems really defensive, and I agree with Lindsay, he does seem like he's scared of something. I can' wait to see how their relationship progresses. Good work so far. :)

-substitute angel

I love reading Lindsay and Thrasher's confrontations in lunch. They're very intriguing to read. Maybe Lindsay will make friends with the seemingly nice Asian girl? Very well written chapter. Can't wait for more!

Great chapter! I love the conversation between Thrasher and Lindsay...it was kinda cute how Lindsay picked up on the fact that he wouldn't hurt her.

I wonder why he's the way he is.

AMAZING! as usual but yet again you seem to capture my interest with this thrasher character i luv it. and sam (i stick with my very frank answer as before) but please hurry and use your intellectual talent an finish

HAHA I love how you phraise things like that "They say that we girls are attracted to screwed up guys because we want to fix them—as if we’re mechanics and they’re rusty old cars." hmm Is Trasher a guy taking all AP's too?.. btw lol just curious, what made you decide to use AP's over IB's? haha what happened to Trasher, he just disappeared after lunch.. ooh i wonder who wrote taht poem. would it be Trasher trying to make her go away. there's soo much going on. That's soo cool! I want to help build a house too. Glad you had fun!

oh wow, what's up with Lorraine, it can't be that bad.. it'sonly the first day. It would probably get better... wonder what happened to her mom and her best friend... what could be so bad they had to move... great update!

haha Trasher! How did you come up with that? It seems to fit him nicely. Red hair and purple eyes... haha i can't imagine what he looks like, it's kind of hard.. what I see in my head looks funny. So he's out to be a complete outcast? the dye and the contacts...

Thats so cool!

And I loved this chapter, Toni reminds me of one of my friends, so I adore her.

Great job!

update soon!