|Reviews for At the End of the Day|
| woodstock1969 3/22/08 . chapter 2
Have I told you how much I love Lorraine? I don't think I've quite expressed it enough. Her melodramatic middle school perspective is so endearing. Oh, how I remember those days...
Anyway, I'm excited for an update!
| ess3sandra 3/22/08 . chapter 1
seems fun, go for it.
| Vinyl Cupcake 3/21/08 . chapter 1
Ooh, great so far!
Thrasher's an interesting guy so far :D I can't wait to find out more.
| ThatOneKidWhoDoesn'tLikeSalami 3/20/08 . chapter 1
awesome! haha its very intriguing. can't wait for saturday Thrasher seems like a cool kid ... who happens to have the unfortunate hobby of wanting to kill his classmates. and i probably need not mention this because he IS a guy, but if my eyes clashed with my hair i would probably never be able to look at my reflection ever again. that is all.
| doctor's diagnosis 3/16/08 . chapter 1
Yay new story! I love the plot so far!
| dimethylmercury 3/16/08 . chapter 1
Wow.. this does really seem different, which is a good thing(: If you're trying another style of writing, this works well too. The thing about her dying her her brown was an interesting idea(: I think Thrasher's a weird nickname, reminds me of an Archie comic that I've read before when Jughead had the same name:/ But, I suppose it fits a person like him. Can't wait for the next chapter, where hopefully some things will be answered(like why he dyed his hair/wears colored contacts,etc)
| xonea 3/16/08 . chapter 1
I actually like the name Patrick Fitzpatrick.I think it's kinda Thrasher too. xD
Anyway,enough about that.
I'm really glad you posted a new story 'cause it has been so .
I really enjoyed reading this and I am looking forward to the next chapter!
| Singingperson 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Not like any of your other stories?
Oh, then I'm in for a surprise!
I thought this first chapter was really good.
I looked how you described Thrasher.
He sounds charming. :D
I can't wait to see what you do.
I promise I'll be reading every chapter..
I just can't promise that I'll be able to review for every one of them.
But I will read them.
| angels and effects 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Whoots! New story! :D
I really enjoyed reading this, first of all. It's definitely different from your previous stories, but still very good. Is this the story you were talking about on Facebook? The one you said you've been working on, if I don't remember wrong. Lol, anyway, I guess the only thing I can comment on is that Lindsay could do with some development. Erm, I mean character development, that came out somewhat wrong. xD When I was reading it, I felt that while introducing Patrick aka Thrasher (I really love his nickname!), not much of Lindsay's background was mentioned. That's about all. Thrasher (should I refer to him as Patrick or Thrasher? Erm.) is looking to be a great character. Can't wait to see how it turns out ;)
By the way, I couldn't help noticing Lindsay's last name. My male protagonist in Give Me Animosity has that last name too. Maybe I should change it, haha. x
Looking forward to the next chapter!
| The Cat Died Nobly 3/15/08 . chapter 1
I don't think I can explain how excited I am for this story. Really.
I love sleuthing characters; that's a lot like me, so I guess I always associate them as some sort of kindred spirit. I hope this won't be a typical bad-boy-meets-good-girl type cliche, but even if it is, I have confidence in your writing style.
So very excited. I can't wait until next Saturday!
| wandless 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Hello! It is I! Wandless! Who you may remember from reviews of your other stories. Hopefully.
Oh I really like your new fic! Firstly, she dyed her hair brown! When it was blonde! The thought of it makes me want to cry. And I really like 'Thrasher' (what a lame name), although I think Lindsay should call him Ronald McDonald. That is just plain funny.
So this seems pretty typical - new girl, angsty guy, she's drawn to him, he's all emo (except I actually mean emotional) and has issues. I can't wait to read more!
This story seems to have a lot of potential, although it seems a bit unoriginal. Hopefully some exciting stuff will happen. But it's well written - I feel suspense, happiness, confusion, everything I'm supposed to be feeling.
Have a great week and please update soon!
| luv me like no other 3/15/08 . chapter 1
This sounds like an awesome beginning to an awesome story! :)
| FeatherfooD 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what's behind Thrasher's attitude. Keep up the good work!
| 5w33t5mil3z 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Very interesting chapter. I really want to know what happens next. This Thrasher guy seems like a complex person. I wanna know more! So update soon. )
| only pretending 3/15/08 . chapter 1
Oh. I think I like this Trasher fellow. :)
Great job, Lindsay sounds very interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter. xD