|Reviews for At the End of the Day|
| ThatOneKidWhoDoesn'tLikeSalami 4/7/08 . chapter 4
the type of skinny "girls develop eating disorders to achieve." omg there is this one girl at pure fashion( i kno this has nothing to do with your story haha), she's a leader and she is so ridiculously skinny, like even smaller than Tine. not evening kidding shes like the size of a skinny 6th grader. healthy for a 6th grader not a 25? year old though. but she's really nice, and apparently shes good now, but wasn't so good last year. and umm yeah thats my story lol. after typing it out i realized how completely pointless that was, but i might as well share now that's it written.
YAYYAYYAYYAY! that was an exciting way to end a sunday night lol. great chapter. lover thrasher. their ... conversations are always so entertaining! and everything is just really great and all. and not much else to say really. at least that i can think of at the moment. except that Lindsey bugs me. but then again i've never been a big fan of my own sibling, there might just be bias
| x.X.Earthfire.X.x 4/7/08 . chapter 4
I love it!
| dimethylmercury 4/7/08 . chapter 4
Amelia seems...a little.. off? Cause of the smirk then smile thing, but maybe I'm just being..random. Poor Lindsay, all alone...but seriously, she's got a lot of..courage? For just randomly calling someone she doesn't know very well, and someone who doesn't like her much. HAHA(: Will she hear someone on the phone that she might not be expecting? Like... family problems in the background or something of that sort? Hm..
| only pretending 4/7/08 . chapter 4
This was a really awesome chapter! Great work.
Dont worry about getting less and less reviews, I think your stories great. :)
| Angel of Ink 4/6/08 . chapter 4
M... I likes. I might write more, but I was supposed to get off like forty five minutes ago.
So just, I enjoy reading this, and please write more soon? :)
| mia5081 4/6/08 . chapter 4
Ooh, Thrasher kinda, well he exposed his inner feelings (do I sound like a therapist? Because that was sorta the tone I was looking for lol). I'm a little suspicious of Amelia at the moment, but I think she's a like-able character once I deduce (oh man, that's a funny word-I've been looking for a reason to say it all day) that she's not going to harm Lindsay in any way.
| urjellingcauseimevil 4/6/08 . chapter 4
sorry i havent reviewed heh heh.
ok so to make up for it here is what i basically would have said:
1)Patrick is a sexy beast
2) Lindsay my HERO
3) i think Patrick is A Helping Soul- or a guy who will fall in love with linz and then make our dear Thrasher - dare i say it- jealous! cause everyone knows jealousy is dead sexy;)
4) i kind of want a bitch fight between amy and linz
5) Amelia seems prety suspisious to me *strokes chin* hm
6) YAY GREAT STORY UPDATE SOON OTHERWISE I WILL BE THRASHER DEPRIVED
| Nonstandard 4/6/08 . chapter 4
This was a really good chapter :]
Hm. I kinda sorta think maybe Thrasher is writing the notes to her?
update soon please :]
| hellolonely 4/6/08 . chapter 4
Ah, this chapter (and the previous one which I didn't get to review) was lovely! I love the character development of Thrasher (jeez, I sound like my English teacher haha). You're doing a good job at showing us "him". And hmm...am I sensing that Lorraine is trying to fit in, like Yolanda did? Hehe, anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Have fun at the college, gratz on getting accepted! :}
| Essevera 4/6/08 . chapter 4
Nice chapter. Can't wait for the next update
| doctor's diagnosis 4/6/08 . chapter 4
I've been meaning to review, and I don't know, but I just seem to forget. I am super sorry, really.
My thoughts... I love how you're developing thrasher's character. A lot. But I feel like I don't really know Lindsay so well. So maybe some more direct characterization of her.
| Alora The Sleepy 4/6/08 . chapter 4
I like the new story! But I have a few things I wanted to tell you: these chapters are leaving me feeling empty. Like... they don't have enough content or something. I think it's because each consists of school, picking Lorraine up, calling Toni. And that's it. And it's kinda repetitive and... yeah. Other than that I spotted some typos but I can't remember where they are.
So yeah. I love Thrasher. His personality rocks. :D
Can't wait for the update.
| DazedStarr 4/6/08 . chapter 4
You are an awesome writer.
I love this story.
| deny.me.not 4/6/08 . chapter 4
She's going to call Patty? I'm just anticipating the phone conversation, haha. I find Amelia kinda suspicious, but she seems pretty nice. I KNEW that azn was going to become a more important character that just that "azn chick".
Yay for more rando poems, I really want to find out who the person is, maybe its Patty, HAHAHA.
I look forward to your next update.
| fatso17 4/5/08 . chapter 4
... err, "please, pretty please, write more?"