Stark. It portrays quite a harsh reality. I thought the last line was quite long, maybe put a line space after the colon. I also thought that the a/n could actually have done well as the last line of the poem.

Yay for you writing more :p

Great poem! I like it... a lot! The last line seemed a bit too long compared to the rest, however. Always be positive. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^