Reviews for The Dedodakes Chronicles

Reviews For: The Dedodakes Chronicles

evellesque 2008-07-16 ch 14,	abuseCan Varanda seriously fly? That part was a tad confusing.. But if she really can then that would be SWEET. And unexpected. Way to NOT kill your characters. Oh, and good to know that electricity prices are through the roof on other planets. But what about those hover cars then? Are they powered by super special magic gasoline? Lol...
evellesque 2008-06-30 ch 12,	abuseDON'T KILL VARANDA! Ah, the suspense. It just keeps getting better and better.
evellesque 2008-06-17 ch 10,	abuse10-wo Ophelia is revealed! way to end the chapter! How many more chaps are you gonna write? (If only Titikian and American money worked the same way...I'd be making millions off of aluminum foil...and my dad's car. ^_^)
evellesque 2008-06-17 ch 7,	abuseCh. 7 was pretty good, and I really liked the shift of events in ch8, it really grabbed my attention...it just seemed like the part where the police get involved was a little rushed...it was sudden, but it didn't have a very dramatic feel to it...It would've been cool if you'd described the scene abit more, or built up some suspense. But I thought ch9 was way better...I'm totally digging this story...lol.
evellesque 2008-06-17 ch 6,	abuseooh ophelia and sarah are screwed! lol. -drama-. Anyways, sorry about waiting so long to review, I didn't forget you or anything! You did the dialogue (ch6) perfectly. It was way easy to catch up on. But still good lol.
BassClarinetPlaysTheSadSong... 2008-06-17 ch 4,	abuseThis is gunna take a while...XD But it's totally rad so far MissD!!
snowdance-lyghtning 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseREVIEW MARATHON! Thanks for reviewing my story, Ride of a Lifetime! I like yours so far. Thanks for steeing up the theme. In all topics, especially ones that no one knows about, that's extremely helpful. The cliffhanger's also really good. Must...keep...reading!!
evellesque 2008-04-11 ch 5,	abusechapter 5...OOh, this one just really snagged my interest. favorite chapter so far.
evellesque 2008-04-01 ch 4,	abusenice continuation of ch3-this one was much easier to follow...hahah 'six week extended learning experience to Calcutta'..nicee oh, and about the ... thing, I really dont know... dot dot dot
evellesque 2008-03-27 ch 3,	abusehey. sorry I couldn't read this sooner! stupid biology report. anyways... I think this chapter makes a hell of alot more sense, just reading it once, than any other chapters you've written so far. I think that's partially because there were actual human beings involved in a semi-normal setting. At least, the names were easier to pronounce. haha. Oh, but I like the format you used to write this one, even if fanfiction did kill ...the dash page thingy? okay okay I'm verging insanity. thinking to much again, lol. Did I mention that Eybyboko is the sweetest name everr?
Teldumor 2008-03-24 ch 2,	abuseIt's good, but I'm confused. It's interesting, her seemly obsession with this Dedodakes, and it makes we wonder if the previous chapter was all just her imagnination. Prehaps all of this, her reasoning and such, the whole alien issue, is simply her deluding herself. Wierd.
Laniatus 2008-03-22 ch 2,	abuseWHO! That's all I'm saying. :D It's interesting. I pwn these reviewing skills, don't I? nowai! It's original, so that's good...right? Okay, so maybe 'WHO!' isn't the only thing I'm saying...
evellesque 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseoh interesting! i never really thought of aliens as fearing earthlings...interesting perspective! the names get a tad confusing, but that just takes some getting used to..are you going to add more chapters?

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