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| dinodaw 2008-05-09 ch 1,  | abusewhy did you have to make it so SAD? At first i liked it but then sniff it got so sad sniff Why? sniff why? dinodaw |
| Demon Tales 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseIntresting story. It began as a humorous tale, but quickly became a tragedy. I would have liked a continuation, but there would truely be no point. It's a good story, none the less! Peace ~Demon Tales |
| R.J.Warren 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm, a new outlook on life definately (i can't spell). Kinda sad though, but the first two paragraphs made me laugh |
| R.E.D. the animator 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThe first two paragraphs were funny, but the later ones (and epeacialy the last one) were sad. Now I'm all sad. It feels like a part of my soul is now deader. (Yes I am so sad that I'm using improper English!) Nice going! Now my day is ruined! Just kidding! But still... sad. |
| Double AA 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseAnd this is why cookies actualy don't have souls. There is no point! You made the story longer than when I first read it, I suppose that's a bonus. Is this the end? Or will there be more? Keep Writing! Double A |
| Bob Evans 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseWhat I want to know is why the teeth didn't kill it immediately. And, if not them, then why not the stomach? I'm a little disturbed thinking that my cookies are still alive when I got to the bathroom to do my business. Ew! ~Bob Evans |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThis made me extremely hungry. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseWow! That ancient two-day-old cookie sure can endure a lot. But of course, being a cookie is a lot better than being a blueberry muffin (what a nightmare!) Hehe. This story made me giggle, needless to say. Thanks for that! |
| Ms. Critic 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseMy first story! It's exciting, but kind of sad the only thought that came to me was a living cookie. |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseA cookie with a soul? That is an interesting concept. I liked it, but can tell you can do better. (I know that's hard to here, but if you re-worked this story a little I KNOW is would be awesome!) Write on! Pen.Dragon |