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Reviews For: You, Me, Cristiano and the Monkeys

painted.music
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abusekonnichi wa

This was touching. Even more touching when I read the author's note and realized it was true. I love flash fiction, and this worked very well as that. I loved the line:

"The good thing about the dark is that you can pretend to be (with) someone you’re not."

Ha det
-Shan-
kelsi bones
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseand first kisses don't mean anything,
But at least I would have liked it to be someone
Who had stolen my heart along with my lips.

those lines are amazing. love, love, LOVE them.

k.X
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