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| painted.music 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa This was touching. Even more touching when I read the author's note and realized it was true. I love flash fiction, and this worked very well as that. I loved the line: "The good thing about the dark is that you can pretend to be (with) someone you’re not." Ha det -Shan- |
| kelsi bones 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseand first kisses don't mean anything, But at least I would have liked it to be someone Who had stolen my heart along with my lips. those lines are amazing. love, love, LOVE them. k.X |