as odd as it is, i like it. great job.

i love this, even with the double meanings.

and this is going to sound very... weird, or whatever, but what types of assignments have you gotten in creatve writing class? i signed up for it next year, but i have no clue what to be expected to write.

:)

-jianna

I love the idea. o: Very unique!

Great poem, too. I adore the comparisons to Icarus and the whole strange love affair in general. 'She sings me to dark eternity' is an awesome line.

All in all, awesome. (: