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| lonely silhouette 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseWonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful. This really provides the reader with a lot to think about. Yes, life gives us a lot of failures. Very true. But, be aware that we have success too. Love the little lines about the escapes. Well, actually, I liked the whole entire poem. It is right. The only person we can really rely on is ourselves, and we must keep our dreams insight in order to be the person we want to be. |
| Emily Lee 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI really liked how you wrote this. I can relate to all the love failures that life gives us, compared to the perfect story book romance. I think we all need to provide our own escape every once in a while. Good job. |