Reviews for Malice or Denial - FictionPress.com

IlfirinEstel 2008-05-22 ch 2,	abuse"i make excuses to touch my/warm fingers to her/cold ones sometimes –/(but never do i allow my gaze to linger)" I meant to review this a long time ago and just never got around to it. But those lines are just -so- me. Especially the last one.
painting andromeda 2008-03-27 ch 1,	abuseI liked the layout to this poem, I thought it added to the eloquence and substance. Stephen
Shadows in the Fire 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseWow. Perfect. -Shadow
Julius Gillian 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseI'd really love to be your blanket, your poetry wins my heart... and my fire.
Moondog Dozier 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThis has a marvelous audible tenderness to it. Not only the scene described, but the way that the words were chosen to fit into the structure. Excellent work. MD:77.
QueenVixta 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseAbsolutely beautiful. You can just tell how heartfelt and real this poem is to you. Well done. [QV]
diffident 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI love the tone and the style in this poem. I don't know why, but it paints a very muted, balanced portrait. Sorry if I'm not making sense. But I really like this. It's concise and it doesn't try to stretch a concept too far. Short poems really are the best. marie