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| fatbird33 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abusei think that this sends a good message. little editing. I do believe that throughout is one word, not two. |
| LeeDarien 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abuseO...you're so dark, maxe. Your poetry is actually inspiring me to write, which anything good that i read does. In this case i'm reading something great and it's making me want to write...You're poetry is my muse. |
| ohthevoices 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this, because it's so true, that even though life sucks sometimes, there's other moments that make it worth living. Nicely done! |
| Purpose 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it (it goes with my outlook on life). I especially liked the 'But painful as it may be / Life is worth living to me'. Cool, keep it up. |
| AngelIvey22 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAw! Abby I loved that! Good job! |