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| Princess-anna57 2008-03-15 ch 1,  | abuseConveys a lot of emotion. Well done. Always be positive and keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseFistly, if this poem has any ground in reality I suggest you get help like from the YMCA or the police. Parents should never beat their kids up. I do think this poem is hauntingly beautiful in an angsty sorta way. I love the first line. It's beautiful. |