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| Ranoko 2008-07-17 ch 16,  | abuseWow; repiarable neurons. That's always handy! ^.^ And DNA with a short memory... Umbras are an immensely interesting race! :3 heheh still enjoying your integration of everything; race information, origins, meeting... ^w^ (though I suppose that's what you're aiming for... |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-07-11 ch 15, | abuseGood chapter, the lyrics were awsome! Did you write them by chance? |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-06-30 ch 14, | abuseAwsome, I love Spiral's descripition, she sounds so pretty :) Update soon! |
| Ranoko 2008-06-22 ch 14, | abuseX3 Well, we humans are pretty critical of our own species at times; why should it be any less funny when others do it? XD Interesting idea on how Ted got his DNA without being born from an Umbra family. Well... 'technically', anyway.(or... would it be 'un-technically'? ...X3' haven't the slightest...) I continue to love reading this~ ^w^ Ja~ |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuseThis whole chapter had me laughing. :) |
| Ranoko 2008-05-23 ch 12, | abuseWoo! Magical handcuffs! XD And further reaches of the MSI are revealed. >:3 (though not that unexpected XD) Enjoying this lots~! Also makes me impatient with my progress... Curse you, homework! And... procrastination... ^-^' I'll be off now... Ja~ |
| Enjoy-Silence 2008-05-22 ch 12, | abuseCool! I love this! ^_^ |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-05-15 ch 12, | abusecool! Can't wait to see more! |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-05-07 ch 11, | abuseSome people have all the fun...:) Can't wait to see what happens! *explodes* See! I couldn't wait, my demise was your doing! Expect police tonight... |
| Zombie Ferox 2008-04-01 ch 6, | abuseI like it so far, keep up the good work! |
| Ranoko 2008-03-18 ch 3, | abuseThe origin of Ranga's fear of asparagus is revealed! >:D I'm liking how this is developing as you delve more into your characters and their backgrounds. I look forward to seeing how you continue~ ^-^ Ja~ |
| The Masked Sentinel 2008-03-17 ch 3, | abuseHmm, Good start. |