Amazing job at expressing yourself. It was well written. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

i know exactly how you feel. i hate to say it put i just care about him too much. if only i can forget him. anyways, geat poem. amazing job! hope you can check out my work. :)

Aw. Is this based on your true emotions? Are you feeling better now? :)

When I saw the title I was like "WAIT A MINUTE, that looks familiar!" HAHAHA. We have same titles! That's cool! Anyway, I liked it. I've always been fond of repetitiveness (I honestly hope that's a word). This is one of them.

i love it... i normaly dont like repetative ness, but the 3 or 4 lines you had repeated were very good, and helped the poem a lot.

confused a little. But nice job. I understand how this is. He hurt me had me crying and lying to ppl i care about.. i finally told him to go away b/c i'm done.. Keep up the good work.


XKristie MarieX

I will just skip the whole review thing, seeing as you can, guarenteed, guess what I would say :)
Now to content... does this have anything to do with the thing you went to Friday night? And btw, you are not an idiot, that is only the confusion talking.

when on earth did this happen?
am i that lost?
youre not an idiot.
and i dont mind.
i love the repeating part.
and the end is amazing.
golly, youre just amazing.

If you're an idiot, a confused one, then so am I.