Silly me! I thought the story ended at chapter five, so you can imagine my delight and surprise when I discovered that you continued!

I love your writing style so much, it's absolutely beautiful and lyrical. And I love all the metaphors, adages and cliches inserted into the story,it just adds to the overall creativity of the story.

Let's see, your plot is fantastic; despite being the love story of Death and a mortal girl it's incredibly romantic and sweet. I apologize, I have no criticism for you, only praise.

Happy writing!

This has got to be one of the weirdest stories i've ever read...i love it!

this is...AWESOME! this deserves a hell of a lot more reviews!

awesome story, i dont know why there isnt any more reviews. Because i seriously enjoy this story. It really different, and i love that bond between Death and Arianne. It a really good and different story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

ta-ta

Your writing is absolutely lovely, and I wish this story wasn't completed so I could read more. I love your descriptions, you have such unusual perspectives and fabulous and beautiful imagery. I also liked the plot, even if I found the ending a little vague. Great work!

I loved this so much, it left me wanting more lol. But it also ended so well! It was beautiful!

In the third chapter, second paragraph, there is an error.

Besides that, I enjoy the imagery that this conjures to my mind, similar to your other stories. It is the main reason that I like the stories. Keep the imagery vivid and spark imaginations.

Now, if you ever come to it, you should finish that story that was up here with Glass a while back.