Loving this, you are so unbelievable talented and its only one chapter in! Can't wait for more

woah...this story is great! i don't know what to expect next...but i'll bet it's good!

This is a masterpiece!^^

Oh, my! I don't think I've read a story this dark but so sultry at the same time. This is only the first chapter and I'm already burning up! It's so intriguing~

That's why I'm so sad about the plagiarism thing. I would've loved to read the rest. Thank you nonetheless! :)

Oh my god. This is the type of story that I would usually hate, but . . . I'm fascinated! Going on to the next one.

Twisted and deep -- beautiful writing! Do you have plans for a sequel?

I'm strangely intrigued by this story. Sebastian is just crazy.

How...disturbingly cute.

;)

Well, first of all I want to apologize for getting far too distracted to read up on your story! I've been working ** my own, while sketching up a few characters for it.

I've read quite a few other stories in my long hiatus, and found that coming back to Dreams of Angst is quite refreshing. Most of the stories I've found are high school-related, and so on. It's the theme I enjoy most, but I paritcularly like this one.

I could clearly imagine the scene with the doll, and to me I found it somewhat unsettling. It's creepy, but that's what the atmosphere of the story calls for. I'm excited to see what happens next, as I know things are going to get ugly.

Great chapter as usual!

I would love to follow your story!

Seb/Morto is one sick dude. I'm not sure WHAT he was feeling but it didn't seem like love to me...

However this story is great, and this whole sinister/horror edge to the story works really well. Well-done!

I just finished watching a Death Note episode, while I read this chapter in-between commercials. Lol, and I couldn't hlep but compare them.

You have a rather twisting plot, and I can't believe that Sebastian would reveal so much of himself - without revealing anything at all. He's put his neck out there, and she's taken the bait.

But it worked so perfectly in his favor. He can bend even misfortune against its will, and turn the tide.

Amazing! Simply amazing! This chapter ensnared me right from the start, and held me til the very end. It's quite action-packed, I was really craving the Nef & Sab fluff.

The scene in the elevator was quite entrancing, and I smiled when 'The elevator opened and she pulled him out because he had been too disappointed to even move.' I found that rather cute.

Hah. Cute? He's anything but cute, he's a dark and intimidating man - but that's what gets us all stuck to him. His cryptic demeanor draws us in, like a moth to a flame. I was rather surprised when Larson appeared, gun-ho and whatnot, but I knew they'd be okay.

There was no way Sebastian was going to let things get too far out of hand. I wonder if a mortal could kill someone like him? Or if he's impervious to any mortal damage, or weaponry? Does he bleed like we do, or is he trully immortal?

It's almost bedtime over here, but I had to sneak a few more reads. I'm really liking this Nef/Seb 'Fluff' as you call it. I love the tension, and the amount of restriction their 'relationship' is under right now.

Sebastian is quite the murderous character, isn't he? Every time I thought he'd stop - he just kept bashing Cassandra around. It just got worse and worse, he reminded me of a bull in a china shop.

But his attitude is quite sexy, and everytime he unveils just a sliver of his plan or lets us into his mind, his personality, I find him all the more alluring and sultry. He's a sexy, dark man!

My, My! Sebastian is quite clever, isn't he? As I read I kept wondering all along how he would earn her trust - what ploy was he devising now? It came to me as quite a shock, but works so perfectly.

I was born and raised in lower Manhattan, and call it home til this day. I'm quite familiar with Astor Place, and quite fond of it. I love the Village, it was where people could always find me. So, I've also centered my own stories around the area - and am thrilled to read about it in your story, too.

Bravo!