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Bulimia vs Believing Me
Faith Adeline
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
wow...I adore it. Great double meaning. Great piece overall. Keep it up!
Faith
Dormio
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Really good. That's all I can say. It's really good how you put the subject in such a haiku.
vaudeville summers
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Ah, clever ^^
Your haikus are always fabulous! No constructive criticsm from me because I'm far too jealous of you.
Very nice poem, as always.
~DeAnna
Tranquil Thorns
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Awesome haiku, especially considering the subject.
Love the double meaning.
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