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ilovevampires2 2008-07-13 . chapter 1
Wow. I love it. It was beautiful!
The Postscript 2008-03-21 . chapter 1
Oh, I like this poem a lot! The message is really great; the rhyming and flow are sometimes a little awkward. I think if you just touched it up here and there this would be a awesome. Keep writing!
Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Nice little poem!

I found a few mistakes. 'Unattached these strings from me' should be 'unattach'. In 'But all I can do is screaming', 'screaming' would sound better as 'scream'.

All in all, though, good work!
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