This was a very well written poem. You have a very strong style, and I always notice certain things in people's poetry. Your poems, although usually short, always have a deep meaning with very few words. That is very difficult to do, but you do it well. Less words sometimes work better than a long four page poem. Wonderful work, continue to work!

Very Sweet.

Very cute!!


XKristie MarieX

I like the whole song thing.. it's cute and sweet. The only thing is the last stanza the flow seemed off with the middle line that long and the last line that short... other than that really well done

very sweet, paints a pretty picture of love.

A sweet poem. (:

I can almost hear the violins and harps in the background. Pretty!