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| painted.music 2008-03-16 ch 1,  | abusekonnichi wa This was really cute. That first paragraph is true to life -- to me that is what a librarian is. I don't remember the name of our elementary school librarian (I think it might have been something like Shelly or Mrs. Shelly?), but I do remember she had short, curly, bright red hair. And she always had this smile when you came in as if to say, "Don't worry, I know where your book is." ;D In my local library, the librarians know EVERYTHING! I'm serious, I still half believe that they must pass down the information from one to the other. Okay, no I don't -- but it's almost scary! You can ask for some random, obscure author; and they'll know who the person is! "Oh, you mean the book [insert title]. Sure, it's probably over there with all the other books about falling meatballs." *grin* That last, short, two-liner was also really cute. The almost play-on-words of "brains obese with knowledge" and then "to become obese, I went home and baked cookies." It was a cute way to end it. :) Many people will probably tell you to split up your paragraphs, and if I hadn't been so enraptured from beginning to end I'd be one of those people. I just thought I'd point that out. Just in case you wanted to change it or whatever. Ah, this brought back innocent, sweet memories. Ha det -Shan- |