 Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-17 . chapter 1This is lovely, especially considering your thoughtfulness.
'We’ll be together/Under the stars,/On a beach of blue' is a peaceful, calming, pretty image. I really like the sense of hope this gives.
'Even though we’re worlds apart,/I’m here for you' is a beautiful ending line. Like the other reviewer said, I hope your friend saw this. |