its unfortunate that you are not going to continue this story :(

update soon pleaes. great story so far.

:0 It's so cute and sexy! I lurv it. Hope you update soon! I love Kai, too. :3

UPDATE! :D

...Wow. Vampire stories are awesome. I love Kai! He's so freaky. Yeah!

O.O

Kinda 'aw' at the end.

update sooN!

Interesting...not your average vampire story. I'm intrigued.

I liked it. LOL if Kai really wanted to he could be so back to Lucas. LOL Sorry my perverted mind at work LOL Update soon, I enjoyed it.
~Shik

this is an awesome story so far. i love vampire romance and yaoi stories, so what could be a better story than both of them put together. please update soon! :)

omg!

i so totally loved this. you have to write more. or i will send you voodoo magic that will give you writers block for a hundred years... o wait, then you couldn't write more... a! too confusing, going back to my cupboard now; i need some sl...

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oh wow. this is really cool. i really like kai, he's fun(ny). i like your style, flows well, characters are well-drawn too. so i hope you post again soon :D

the laws make no sense, and the vamps got a restraining order rather than a chaotic free will. please explain these laws fully.
START USING STRAIGHT PEOPLE SHANNON

and then what?

OMG it is good you should keep going so i can keep reading lol but really it is good i love the origen for the vamps.

very nice! Can't wait for the next chapter!

that's kinda sad. "mine doesn't beat. i wouldn't hate a vampire anyway. one guy at my school thinks that i'm a vampire and i'm gonna die 'cause i'll drink someone's blood who has AIDS. he also thinks i'm high on blood all the time. good chapter! i really liked it!