The second stanza is wonderful and I love the comparison to butterflies something so beautiful and fragile. The ending brings this whole piece together nicely.

incredible !

Sounds like the strom isn't all that bad, or maybe just very confusing. I like the way that you described this.

keep it up.

sweet and romantic. nice.

i think the last line was a bit, hm, contrived. otherwise, a very palatable poem. i say this because somehow when i read it, it sounds like it could have been more beautiful. like it's got even more potential.

still, pretty good. i'm lovin' the first verse.