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TexasWatermelon
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuse*sigh* Must you always show me up when you write poetry?

This was lovely, to say the least. Which is what I'm going to do right now because it's early and I'm tired. Formatting was brilliant, as per usual.

I thought you hated snow?

Tex
Steampunk Champagne
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseI'm not usually into haikus, but you did a good job here. Reminds me of the original Japanese ones.

-SC
Tranquil Thorns
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseSad and pretty at the same time.

I love that second line. And nicely presented, too!
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